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Kethry
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0 posted 2002-03-02 04:12 AM


I want interloper's challenge
To have people share desire
I don't want to give advice
I just want their passion's fire
To keep me warm through winter's chill
I'll take his challenge steal its thrill

I want interlopers challenge
Have poets whisper in my ear
Telling me their sweet desires
Whispering and drawing near
And if I should give advice
I'd be gentle I'd be nice

I want interlopers challenge
I would play at doctor love
I want to hear the sacred yearnings
Of a heart that soars above
If you share  from secrets well
I promise you that I won't tell

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



© Copyright 2002 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2002-03-02 06:13 AM


Keth darling sister of my heart and keeper of the dreamers secrets, you know I love this, NO ONE writes these better absolutely no one. Fabulous utterly utterly fabulous.

I want you to write forever more
I want you to fly to simply soar
To wrap your soul in dreams desire
To cede your heart to love’s fire
To stir me always with your voice
To always have another choice
I want you to listen to your heart
To never feel you’ve drifted apart

Each if these I want for you
For you are loving good and true


You know I absolutely love this darling heart, as always perfect writing


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-03-02 06:58 AM


very nice Keth..He will certainly respond  with desireous words I am sure ..I wonder how I can get his challenge  ...hmmmmm  am thinking *s

Maureen

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with you
3 posted 2002-03-02 11:23 AM


I like the twist you gave his challenge very nicely done.....
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4 posted 2002-03-02 12:08 PM




(giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhhh...I wonder how Doctor Love will respond to this one, this is a very interesting and wonderful new matter in the challenge! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful and creative, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2002-03-03 04:02 AM


Why don't you be the lady doctor and give him some advice....

A taste of his own medicine might be fun~
I would think the good doctor still needs a perscription of love potion~

Cute poem Kethry~

ShadowRider
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6 posted 2002-03-03 04:31 AM


ah, but the whispers in the ear
are shouts that cannot be voiced

silent but deadly

and your poem is
RightOn!  
tSR

GenXer
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7 posted 2002-03-03 04:59 PM


So Keth, you want to be a Medicine Woman of love.  Well, I think you would be great.  Of course you don't want me on your couch, I would be there for days, and you wouldn't be able to help all of your other clients.lol

Dave

Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-03-03 05:57 PM


I really enjoyed this one. Keth...

and if you take my little love pills
your heart will mend
but I'll send you a bill

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
9 posted 2002-03-03 06:04 PM


Ha ha, seems like a tough job sure you want it?
I would whisper all my secrets to you, but they are all poured out all over these pages already.
I'm lonely, is that something you can help?
Sandra

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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2002-03-04 01:50 PM


Of course, I cannot share the private thoughts of my patients ... only their postings

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Enchantress
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11 posted 2002-03-04 04:01 PM


Kethry, perhaps the gentlemen of Passions could come to you with their ailments and you could respond with a prescription for them.  Good idea and wonderful write!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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