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KokoStewartKoomoa
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0 posted 2002-01-12 10:37 PM




The dim light of the moon shimmers
Gently................
Through crystal window pane
Spatters of silver upon cold floor

The silvery silence bares his soul,
As his body presses against mine,
His warm skin beads with sweat,
The essence of his life.

A quiet rendezvous
Sacred Secrets.

His sweet breath tickles my ear
With dreams of this new day
And promises of tomorrow.



Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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Silver Streak
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1 posted 2002-01-12 10:42 PM


Wonderfully penned!
-Sllver Streak

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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2 posted 2002-01-12 10:52 PM


Oh this one likes me!!  Wonderfully sensual!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-01-12 11:27 PM


KokoStewartKoomoa - warm is your write, with sweet, sweet promises of tomorrow...

BC

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4 posted 2002-01-12 11:30 PM


Warm and passionate...such a vision...
enjoyed this...

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5 posted 2002-01-12 11:33 PM




(sigth) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is soooo sensually gorgeous! I love it, sweet friend, may his love fill you with joy every tomorrow! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-01-13 07:40 AM



A pleasurable poem of content...this is a treat from you, Koko...a sound of happy...

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7 posted 2002-01-13 12:30 PM


koko, love just oozes from this incredible and sensual penning.  wonderful...

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-01-13 10:18 PM


Enjoyed this Koko...James
Ivy Rose
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9 posted 2002-01-13 10:35 PM


What a gem of a poem this is!!!!! Wonderful expression and depth of emotion.  ***Ivy Rose
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10 posted 2002-01-13 10:46 PM


What a romantic poem, and what a cool line:
"The silvery silence bares his soul"

Irish Rose
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11 posted 2002-01-13 10:51 PM


Wonderful hopeful poem, Koko, so good to read your words again.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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12 posted 2002-01-13 11:33 PM


a promise of tomorrow, frozen in today. . .

wonderful Koko. . . good to see you again. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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