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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-01-09 01:58 PM


~You And Me For Eternity~

You take away fears you sweep them away
Fading like mist in the dawn of a brand new day
You touch my soul in a way that calls out peace
And your love it is endless it never will cease
Your voice speaks to my heart in accents so clear
Calming and soothing banishing away that fear
You touched me and something in me changed
I feel so different, as if I’ve been rearranged

You changed me, and I don’t know how?
I’ve been altered I’m totally different right now
I’ve become transfigured into a whole new me
Who’s happy and loving and open to beauty
My ears hear music when you say my name
And my heart is alight with passion’s flame
There’s no doubt at all I know you love me
And I feel that love warming me constantly

You have given me a reason to smile again
You’ve illumed my night with delight’s flame
I’m blessed by love I’m caressed by its light
And you my darling fill me with delight
The stars grow dim when I look in your eyes
And rainbows and sunshine decorate my skies
There’s no end to this love it flows eternally
Until the end of time our love will always be


Marsha

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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1 posted 2002-01-09 02:11 PM




(smiles) OH MY GOSH, this is sooooooooo beautiful, I love it!!! (sigh) I hope that your heart forever sings happily in love and he brings sunshine and rainbows to your skies! (kiss on cheek) Oooooohhhh...I love it, I love it, I love it, you always write so beautifully! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-09 02:12 PM




Nothing quite like true love now is there, Marsha.  So good to see you....happy!

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3 posted 2002-01-09 02:25 PM


Ahh, Marsha, this flows with your happiness. Very lovely indeed..very gentle smile
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4 posted 2002-01-09 02:35 PM


Very nice Marsha, as usual, You are sounding quite happy in love. floria
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5 posted 2002-01-09 02:45 PM


Marsha,I do believe you could light up a whole room you are so in love I am so happy for you.





Your friend,

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Suetang
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6 posted 2002-01-09 04:22 PM


Hello Marsha
This was the epitome of romance and love and I could almost hear you singing your joy as you wrote this.....absolutely beautiful!
Take care......Sue

Suetang

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7 posted 2002-01-09 06:06 PM


Marsha - you must have been bubbling when you wrote this. Just great, but then, you are great...

BC

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8 posted 2002-01-09 06:24 PM


Marsha

You have me blushing again.You really shouldn't have wrote this for me.No really,this is truly beautiful and sweet!

Madame Chipmunk
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9 posted 2002-01-09 07:51 PM


It looks like love agrees with you.....it is also very flattering to your poetry.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Marsha
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10 posted 2002-01-09 07:53 PM


Noah darling boy thnak you muchly and I hope I'm always this happy. For no matter how long we have together I will always be warmed by his love. I'm a very lucky girl.

And I know it shows, thank you sweet friend


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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11 posted 2002-01-09 07:55 PM


*grinning* Love will do that to a person...it sure looks great on you and you wear it so well. BRAVO!!! I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marsha
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12 posted 2002-01-09 07:56 PM


Lady yes indeed True love shows.

Do I teinkle just a little? Mmmm I think you're right I do glow just a bit

Thank you Lady dearest I appreciate you truly

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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13 posted 2002-01-09 07:59 PM


Floria, thank you darling girl I guess then it shows? Not that I would want to hide it anyway, as if I could fain indifference. Those who know me Know I show LOVE.

Thank you very muchly YOU have a wonderful talent your writing is excellent


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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14 posted 2002-01-09 08:10 PM


Fabulous!  Marsha, it is so good to hear you like this...keep it going!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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15 posted 2002-01-09 10:38 PM


Marsha - You write about love and passion so well.  Now, I know how you are telling some of us to write happy poems, well I want you to write a sad one.lol  

Dave

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16 posted 2002-01-10 09:25 AM


Juanita darling girl YOU are one of the lights in my life. I'm blessed by you. Always you write joy so well that I'm amazed, truly darling girl YOU are a blessing

And Thank you darling girl Long may Love live, it is certainly welcome to live with me forever.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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17 posted 2002-01-10 09:28 AM


Sue thank you so very much I am enjoying this time, and long may it continue

Your writing is absolutely excellent by the way

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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18 posted 2002-01-10 09:32 AM


Bill darling boy that's me little Ms Bubble. one of my nicknames don't you know Didn't catch on around Passions though..... Now Mushy.... everyone calls me that. I can't imagine why YES I can, and it's true, no one is a s mushy as me

Thank you darling boy for your warmth and you constant support, YOU are always a fabulous friend

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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19 posted 2002-01-13 12:47 PM


Stevie darling boy but of course I wrote it for you, shhhhhhh I had them all fooled they think it’s for someone else darling boy but well you know I love you really.

Thank you dearest heart


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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20 posted 2002-01-13 12:47 PM


Lyra darling girl thank you muchly when I’m happy I’m really really happy. And you can see I’m happy can’t you? Mmmmm I am very very much so

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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21 posted 2002-01-13 12:48 PM


Karen darling girl you always are so very kind to me, if ever there was a soul who deserved to find her magical Prince Charming its you

Take care of you darling girl long may you write wonder and delight

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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