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WANTED: Valentine
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WANTED: Valentine |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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WANTED: Valentine this year I’m starting a little early putting in my request I’m looking for a valentine a soft hearted woman’s quest not looking for flowers, candy or cards these I can get myself want something you can’t buy would like someone to give themselves what kind of man are you must know before we proceed a special kind of man is exactly what I need he has to have a tender heart not the kind to easily stop for many have a fear of me when they find out I’m a cop not looking for a man to take my life but who would love to share that can look beyond my faults a lifetime of love and friendship to be there who sees me as an equal to stand on common ground there when we need each other a true loyalty found a man with a brain for I like to talk and think but that can make me weak each time he winks this too is important so take heed the special gift of humor is also a need if you are this man please don’t be shy I’m looking for a valentine won’t you apply "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Helen, this is sooo well done, and it's never too early to start the search for that perfect Valentine! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
nicely written, with a smooth flow. very enjoyable read. where do we send the applications? smile |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - I counted the requests, and counted 18. Qualified for each one, in this write... BC |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!! I think you will have many applications flooding your email after they read this poem.  Perfect....I love the way you wrote this what you were looking for. Many of those things are also important to me and most women, I think. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You DID get an early start! We're just putting away wreathes and cleaning up pine needles! LOL...very good you! |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
You will find this perfect man, and when you do...can you please see if he has a brother for me? LOL! RP |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, now, Helen, all they would have to do, is to look at your heart, and they should swarm to you....very gentle smile |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, it never can be too early to start, for we all deserve the most beautiful valentine! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo cute, sweet friend, what a proposition indeed! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
Fantastic! Really; a great message. I only have 2 suggestions: 1) Punctuation (I'm addicted to it you see - lol) 2) Regarding your line which reads: "that can look beyond my faults" Don't ask someone to look beyond your faults girlfriend; those are the very traits that someone who loves you will cherish! They are what make you unique and special. Embrace those so called faults, and expect that your Valentine will too! I would wish you luck, but with a post this good, I am sure you won't need it. Aw shucks, here some lucky fairy dust for you anyway +*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+* Mac |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this post needs to be seen more. . . wonderful helen. . . hope that it gets answered. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
Application is submitted LOL. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
bump would like to summit mine for the 23rd year. bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I think you need to send all the leftover applications to the rest of the Passionate ladies here!!  |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
When is my interview? Great poem Helen, you deserve a good man to make you happy. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Helen Absolutely the best I have seen. Now, when you find him, if he has any brothers, I am the on the "request list". Make sure that he is honest, sincere, and loyal too. I hope all of your valentine wishes come true. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Helen...don't know if I qualify for any of your request. I can't measure myself in the eyes of another; all I can do, or be, is what "I" think/feel is right - it's up to others to decide if that's enough or not. So-o...all I can offer is ME, as I am, for your valentine, as much or little as your eyes may see. Walk easy my friend (loved this by the way) jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (01-07-2002 01:24 PM).] |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
ahem....... BUMP |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ummm, since we want the same things...can I just add my name to this request? Oh, I guess I should write my own, you think? This is fun, and also heartfelt, I'm sure.. Sandra |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I like this one..... don't forget to put single : ) |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Where Do I get an application and where I am supposed to send it? J~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ah, a lady in blue. Let me take a 10-7 since I will be 10-6 sending in my resume. You have me 10-95. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
thats a 10-4 |
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