Performance Art (magnetic poetry challenge)

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-01-05 05:30 PM

I think in angry silhouette--
a mean sculpture of raw passion.
(imagine)
hard empty canvas, cold
creating
electric metaphor
surreal
in blacks and white
a psychodelic
swirling
chaos
of asthetic mess.

There, I feel drunk
with rhythm
color fashioned
by wild blues
never fully balanced.

"This paint is music..."
masterpiece
breaking me free
from the absurd.

[This message has been edited by serenity (01-05-2002 07:10 PM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-01-05 05:32 PM

Oh serenity I love your style. Do you paint? I do and I loved the visuals here. floria

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-05 06:56 PM

Oooohhhhhh...I bet you'd make a beautiful artist if you tried painting too, you paint so beautifully woth words always! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend, marvelous performance! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2002-01-05 06:59 PM

Wish I could witness the dance and hear the music upon that canvas.

Wonderful imagery Oh Gorgeous one

good to read you again.

Maree

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-01-05 09:24 PM

This sounds like music, dance, art and poetry all rolled into one beautiful piece.
Very beautiful!

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

wolf
Junior Member

since 2002-01-04

Posts 10
Hamilton (Steeltown)

5 posted 2002-01-05 09:37 PM

attack that writing paper,

attack that canvas,

very aggressive,

very poetic,

very good!

And the music classical?

it's the soul afraid of dying , that never learns to live.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-01-05 09:42 PM

You paint with a brush that is uniquely yours and says here I am hear me. BRAVO!!! I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-01-06 10:55 PM

like I said. . . art. . .

hmmmmmmmmm. . . the link between magnetic poetry and art?????

hmmmmmmmmmmmm. . . *insert mad typing here. . .*

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Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

8 posted 2002-01-06 11:05 PM

I see we took the same path to different destinations---lol
well put together

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-01-07 02:39 AM

serenity - your writings are suburb, as this one is. Drunk with rythmn, full of wild blues, love it...

BC

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2002-01-08 11:06 AM

Thank goodness we all have our own unique style, this world would be a dull read without it! Yours is original and fresh, vivid with depth!

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

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