. . . reborn in your love . . . Senryu

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-01-05 10:20 AM

you are my life dear
I am reborn in your love
and nurtured by you

Inspired by: Marge's Complete This Heart

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

1 posted 2002-01-05 10:37 AM

I love, how love can be so depended on, just like we loved our moms,our first love, great lines here. True love has to be like that.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-01-05 10:57 AM

*sigh* you have captured the truth of love...one feels reborn and that feeling just gets stronger if love is nutured. *sigh* magnificent. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2002-01-05 11:01 AM

enjoy

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-05 11:46 AM

(sigh) Soooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, the most beautiful thing we can expect out of love is only to see it grow deeper in every skipped heartbeat, nurtured with fondness and trust. (big hugggssssss) You are sooooooo romantic, this is a true gem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-01-05 11:52 AM

Yes ..ONE person can make a difference in ones life..as i am listening to that song on the radio right now ha...

~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-01-05 11:54 AM

I think YOU are reborn every time you read a poet's magic, and in this, you were Marge-inspired...

well done!

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

7 posted 2002-01-05 01:11 PM

One of my favorites...Senryu. You are very skilled at saying so very much with so few words. This poem is exquisite!!!!!

***Ivy Rose

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-01-05 02:18 PM

Lovely, simply lovely..floria

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2002-01-05 02:44 PM

Simply lovely words. Not to mention true. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

10 posted 2002-01-05 03:24 PM

Simple.......& lovely...

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2002-01-07 05:41 PM

Inter ...~*~...Loper
Within the heart of you
is a poet, tried and true
writing from the pen of
inspiration from the
hearts of many
I shall send
flowers
~*~

Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

12 posted 2002-01-07 08:56 PM

Awww! This is just lovely, Interloper.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-01-07 09:02 PM

A very simple, to the point and powerful
statement of love...nicely done..

Fallon
Junior Member

since 2002-01-07

Posts 21
USA

14 posted 2002-01-07 10:55 PM

a very sweet love poem!

Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

15 posted 2002-01-07 11:03 PM

Love is a powerful force, which will take anyone with just a touch. However it is not a bad thing. Here it as if one is reborn, an example of the power of love. Great write Interloper, I loved this.

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

16 posted 2002-01-07 11:55 PM

and who else could write in such a voice???

only the Great Voice of the Southland. . . well done Sir. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

17 posted 2002-01-07 11:57 PM

ahhh my PoetFriend Interloper I see that sweetie Marge has touched your gifted pen and inspired you2weave this delicate senryu...
My hi5 2u on a splendid write mind you splendid don't even it cut it 2describe how wonderful this poem is...
2me it's da sweetest...
Smiles2uAlways
*~coco~*

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