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Complete This Heart
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Complete This Heart |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Complete This Heart ~*Marge Tindal*~  ~Offering so.........very openly~ please enter so very lovingly Take this truest heart I give far beyond all of eternity Hold this heart of much measured - treasure I give freely to you all I do possess Complete me in your love * ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 11-14-2001).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marge, Ever the queen of presentation! Not just pretty but nice besides. Thanks.  |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Little Goose, and truest heart indeed, for you have one of the truest ever seen..very gentle smile |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very nice Marge your work is always a delight to read  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I am delighted and honoured Regards, Sudhir |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is a good one Marge...loved the thoughts from your heart...James |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
MARGE~ i love how you do these....this is so lovely and just the peaceful feeling I was looking for today.....   hugs and peace....Greeneyes~ I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-14-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!!So beautiful...I can never get the shape right with a heart but you have done a magnificent job of it. It fits perfectly. BRAVO!!! I love it.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Your heart is awesome!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! His love will forever make your heart complete, and the angels will forever sing in rejoice to the happiness your heart feels! (smiles) This is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet Marge, I always love your beautiful thoughts! (kiss on cheek) Have a beautiful day, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Larry~ Thank you for the very nice compliments~ Logan~ Whiskey~ Thank you so much~ Sudhir~ *smiles* JamesMichael~ So pleased to know you enjoyed it~ GreenEyes~ Awwwww, thank you very much~ StarTime~ I am inspired by a friend who watched me writing and said, "Bet you could even do a heart !" So I just had to do it for him~ Thank you so much~ Martie~ *grinning* with BIG LIKE~ Noah~ Yeah, but did you like it ? *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
you, my complete love I am reborn in your love and nurtured by you Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ The PERFECT response~ Thanks ... I needed that~ *Big Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This says it all! Creatively beautiful, Marge! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge..you are the Mastress of word manipulation. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you so much my sweet friend~ Magnus~ Thanks ... errrr, did you just call me manipulative ? LOL~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- You know I'm smiling big at this one. 'Big Like' looks good on you.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Missed this one somehow and what a lovely job you did on it, very nice work Marge, another of your trademark masterpieces of word art in poetry. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 11-15-2001).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Not only giant hearted, but artistic and visonary in your ways. The most complete heart there is. Sincerely, Regina |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ My precious little buddy ... you know my inspire inside-out~ Thank you for being you~ Mysteria~ Thanks very much. I enjoy an honest penning of the heart~ RWood~ The 'complete' of me has just begun~ but .. I think the pieces fit~ Thank you so much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This heart shall never be "quite" completed because you keep adding to it all the time... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Wow Marge This was great. I had this with someone once. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 11-23-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Looks to me as if the only pieces missing are the two humps...well, now, I do believe that you should have NO problem in completing your little heart. NOW NOW NOW..........I WAS talking about the two humps in your shape poem OKAY!!! Wonderful write my dear one and of course, I am a sucker for the shape thingies. ge gv yuhi |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Your heart holds great thoughts! Hope it receives all the love it can hold. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! This is great! I love the way you did this. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marge! You just KNOW I love how you do this this....and like watching a fellow magician perform....I really don't want to know how it is done! Takes away from the mystique. This is so lovely. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Life may not be the song you requested, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ I hope someday to complete it~ BSlicker~ Thank you ... may it come again to you~ MarkB~ Silly ... it's a 'designer' heart ... Lumps are out of Vogue~ Love ya' Domzi~ Thanks so very much~ SmartChick~ Thank you, dear~ Enchantress~ I appreciate your comments and I appreciate you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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