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0 posted 2002-01-05 08:27 AM



A Fairy’s Poem…for Sy



See a necklace of crystal dew
From a fairy's point of view
Then gather the hand of your adore
This I would ask, and nothing more...

Come with me, a grass blade to climb
Call me sweet one, then call me fine,
Shimmer my wings with sparkling dust
Shake away the winter’s rust

Soon we shall sneak to the dragon’s lair
Just to see if Randy’s there
Then tickle his nose with champagned dew
Who would have thought!  Me, and you?

So often, you have come to rest,
Playing words from deep your chest
Never knowing I was just there
Hiding behind your compare

You thought me but a beam of sun
Never knowing I had become
A fairied thought to float your time
While you sat to pen your rhyme

Ah, but that is just the way of me
A bit of sun, some fairied fantasy
A song complex, from deep within
Where the dragon dwells with kin

So, when you see a necklace of crystal dew
then take it from a fairy's point of view
Just gather the hand of your adore
This I would ask, and nothing more...





[This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-29-2002 08:51 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-01-05 08:34 AM


This is a beautiful poem, Sunshine. I love stories about fairies. I love the pictures, too.
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2 posted 2002-01-05 08:35 AM


Sunshine,
stunningly dew kissed. It makes me wish I was Sy,
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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3 posted 2002-01-05 08:38 AM


Sunshine,
You made my head My heart to you and I love you Sy
I don't save poems as a rule but I'm saving this one.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (01-05-2002 08:41 AM).]

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4 posted 2002-01-05 09:35 AM


Karilea, This is a beautiful piece and the graphics really add to it.  I too am a lover of fairies.  Beautifully done.  
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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5 posted 2002-01-05 09:42 AM


enchanting
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6 posted 2002-01-05 09:43 AM


Kari darling sister of my heart, I'm spellbound, Normally you write well, often you write outstandingly so. Today ahhhhhh you are incandescent my sweet sister.

Absolutely fabulous writing. This I LOVE, truly wonderful

And of course Puck is the jester of the fairies court, I feel right at home

Love and warm stuff
As always
Puck

     
  

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7 posted 2002-01-05 09:48 AM


Karilea~

I'm 'Awwwwwwwwwwwwing' all over the room~

'So, when you see a necklace of crystal dew
then take it from a fairy's point of view
Just gather the hand of your adore
This I would ask, and nothing more...'


What a lovely, lovely piece of enchantment for our dear Seymour~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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8 posted 2002-01-05 09:54 AM


Sunshine,
Sys' a lucky guy!

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9 posted 2002-01-05 02:49 PM


Oh my goodness, ask me if I love this one.  Into my fairy book it goes!  Another?  About a sad fairy?

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

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10 posted 2002-01-05 04:51 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo precious, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) I too am in love with faeries and mermaids, this is sooooooo pretty! Sy will love it!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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11 posted 2002-01-05 05:29 PM


Oh sunshine, I love fairies and this was simply beautiful. floria
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These fairy poems are so inspirational.. happy and delightful.
Who is the love fairy? Or the lovelorn fairy?
Sandra

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Thank you all so much for enjoying this one with me...it's all Sy's fault, for providing so much inspiration!

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14 posted 2002-01-07 01:01 PM


Beautiful!

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15 posted 2002-01-07 01:14 PM


So often, you have come to rest,
Playing words from deep your chest



Never knowing I was just there
Hiding behind your compare

You thought me but a beam of sun
Never knowing I had become
A fairied thought to float your time
While you sat to pen your rhyme
============================================

I had to wait till I could get to a  different computer to see this gem...the graphics crashed my moth computer...
twas worth the wait ...this is lovely and enchanting Sun...and a wonderful gift of inspire for sweet Sy.

Yes I've changed ...
so why couldnt you after all we've been thru,
could I blow your mind ... leave you breathless.

~TS~

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