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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2002-02-11 07:24 PM


Made this for class, Triolet: 8 lines, 1, 4 and 5 are the same, as are 2 and 8, AbaAabAB.



I always wonder where it has been,
when the wind is blowing hard.
Wind itself has never been seen,
I always wonder where it has been.
Sometimes it's soft, sometimes it's mean,
was it at your place, it did start?
I always wonder where it has been,
when the wind is blowing hard.

I always wonder where it has been,
when the rain turns into snow
If there's too much it can be mean
I always wonder where it has been,
by some the snow has never been seen
The wind is moving it by a soft blow
I always wonder where it has been
when the rain turns into snow



A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I



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1 posted 2002-02-11 07:40 PM




(smiles) BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT, this is excellent! YAY!!! Kudos to you, sweet friend, this is a marvelous triolet, it definitely is amazing how weather and so many other things can be so unpredictable to imagine, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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