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Open Poetry #18
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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-02-08 10:31 PM

Hold My Hand
By: Noah Eaton
2/8/02

Hold my hand
I'll show you paradise
Share with me your dreams
We'll find our place in the sunlight

Falling into your emerald eyes
Lost in your rapture
You are my sweet honeybee of heaven
My lifes medicine is your laughter

Cover me in your shawl
Tonight I'll blanket you in ecstacy
Singing to your hypnotic symphonies
Stroking your mocha caramel body

Hold my hand
I'll walk with you for all of time
Hold my hand
You are my hearts delight

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-08-2002 10:31 PM).]
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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2002-02-08 10:53 PM

Noah - wow, you are writing well...

BC
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2 posted 2002-02-08 11:33 PM

"You are my sweet honeybee of heaven
My lifes medicine is your laughter"


Noah, you great big romantic you! This is one of your best sweetie  

[This message has been edited by SEA (02-08-2002 11:34 PM).]
Suetang
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3 posted 2002-02-09 05:13 PM

Hello Noah

Your words always speak of such a special love and a deep devotion.  I'm so glad I found this one and I can't understand why so few have commented on it, so I'm putting it back up where it belongs!

Take care.......Sue

Suetang
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4 posted 2002-02-09 05:29 PM

nice write
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5 posted 2002-02-09 05:58 PM

This one is really great Noah.  You are a very sensitive soul!!!
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6 posted 2002-02-09 06:24 PM

Well done Noah!  You just keep getting better and better.  
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~
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7 posted 2002-02-11 01:49 PM

bravo this is sooo pretty!
I will hold your hand!! even if it was all sweaty lol
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8 posted 2002-02-11 02:48 PM

Soooooooo romantic, I love it.
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9 posted 2002-02-11 03:00 PM

Noah, Lovely as always. Very romantic and perfect for Valentine's Day. Cheryl
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10 posted 2002-02-11 07:17 PM

Noah,if you weren`t so far I would hold your hand.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:
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11 posted 2002-02-11 07:18 PM

Awwwww sweet Noah~

beautiful as always....


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart
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