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jwesley
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0 posted 2002-01-02 10:30 PM




Nocturne

Owl flies – silent, swift –
Something screams, something dying,
Quiet winter woods.

w.james beard, jr
(c)2002


[This message has been edited by jwesley (01-02-2002 11:12 PM).]

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Jamie
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1 posted 2002-01-02 10:32 PM


wonderful haiku- careful, these are addictive

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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2 posted 2002-01-02 10:51 PM


he's right. . . you can't do just one. . .

excellent, a portrait in miniature. . .

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3 posted 2002-01-02 10:54 PM


JWesley~
REALLY stunning imagery in this piece~

Just exactly what a Haiku is supposed to do, it did~
Thanks for sharing, my friend~
Happy New Year greetings to you~
*Hug*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2002-01-02 11:21 PM




(smiles) Oooohhhhhhh...I love this, I'm always so amazed by the beauty you put in your lovely words! (big hugggsssss) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-01-03 11:20 PM


i see the imagery well and shudder...nature can be so cruel at times, yes?
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