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nichole2005 Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 20 |
Words not spoken Thoughts unheard An akward silence fills the room All of the he said, she said Or he did, she did is over Two lonely people sit quietly in the dark Thoughts like what will come to be Or is it over Flow through thier heads like clouds in a tornado A small light still burns in each pure heart The light of Love Although their minds have moved on Their hearts stay true True to the love that came to be That one fall night in October No matter what path life takes us on One day I know our hearts Will always be together!   |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Nichole this was nice and full of feelings. good write, floria |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderfully expressed, Nichole. All writing comes |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
yes...hearts that become connected, stay a part of eachother for all time! RP |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* heartfelt feelings from the very core of love....it means so much even though there are so many mountains to overcome it is worth the climb...I love this poem. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Isn't it amazing...hearts know...minds refuse to admit!!! Great writing!!!! Words expressed without deception...Are the beginning of a poem's conception |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
I hope all is better after that dark day in October! This is a good write Nichole! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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