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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2001-11-23 08:44 AM

Out of my Dreams

You came to me tenderly out of my dreams
Though the touch of your hand was not fantasy’s whim
For you wrapped me in warmth like a blanket of beams
Flowing out from the first blush of dawn’s ruby rim

You appeared from a vision held deep in desire
Though your face, not a misty mirage of the mind
For I saw in your eyes a reflection of fire
From the flame of a candle left burning behind

You came into my life from a long ago time
All the years in between were erased by a kiss
As the dawning’s vermillion radiance defined
The sweet truth that an immortal love does exist

You walked out of the dark into stars of the night
It was not an illusion of mystified eyes
For your kiss was the glory of lover’s delight
Revealed in the essence of star laden skies

Pure ecstasy sometimes is gently unfurled
In the dream of a dreamer’s reality world
And a poet can make any fanatsy true
But in this verse, the truth is the realness of you

Elizabeth Santos

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-11-23 08:48 AM

Beauty & Wisdom in this...

well done, Lady Santos...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-11-23 08:54 AM

Elizabeth,
You got me on this one. Lovely

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-11-23 09:55 AM

*sigh* what a perfect poem to start my day with. Now I will go to work and dream that fantasies might become realities. Yes, the perfect way to start my weekend too. **hugs** I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-11-23 11:10 AM

YES, exactly how I feel today!!!!

Kathleen

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2001-11-23 09:10 PM

When there is the truth and the realness, then all the dreams are that much richer. Such a beautiful write and filled with so many treasures for lines that I couldn't pick a favorite if I wanted to. I always enjoy reading yoir creations and this one holds it's own special appeal. Well done and wonderfully crafted.

misguided angel
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since 2001-11-23

Posts 106
Australia

6 posted 2001-11-23 09:16 PM

Elizabeth, such sweet longing and love in this poem. A beauty.

PoeticLicense
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since 2001-11-18

Posts 30

7 posted 2001-11-23 10:01 PM

A buffet of emotion, a feast for the reader!

PL

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

8 posted 2001-11-23 10:07 PM

A dream that is also reality....is there anything more perfect than this?? Gorgeous poetry, meaning and thoughts here

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

9 posted 2001-11-23 11:36 PM

Bellisimo, my queen

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-11-24 01:34 AM

oh *sigh*. . . Liz, you touch all the right chords with this one. . .

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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2001-11-24 04:36 AM

We shall speak of this one LOL, and on that pleasant note, I now will go hug my pillow. Thank you for a "wish to build a dream on".

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

12 posted 2001-11-24 06:45 AM

Beautiful write! Reading it made me want to float upon a cloud.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

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13 posted 2001-11-24 08:01 AM

The best dreams are the ones that become reality! Beautiful, Elizabeth!

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

14 posted 2001-11-24 08:39 AM

Thank you dear poet friends for reading and commenting on my fantasies and realities.
I hope you aren't still hugging your pillow, Sharon. Write a poem instead!
LOve to all
Liz

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