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Endings repost from open 8
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Endings repost from open 8 |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa 
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Endings Speak to me no more my love, For there's another Summer coming, A warmer, safer solstice in the evening of our love, Remember me no more my love, For memories are moments, In the patterns of our dreams, Reflections in the pool of shared experience, Cry for me no more my love, For tears are a chain that binds thoughtless sensibilities, Smile for me no more my love, For smiles are motives for true insecurities, Sigh for me no more my love, For sighs are dreams undreamt, words unspoken, And fires rekindled, Be with me no more my love, For we are not to be, And you and I have been swept away on a sea of infinate solitude, Turn your back on me my love, For there is strength in our conviction, And unity in our parting, Though we wing our way across different oceans, We are uplifted by the same gentle breeze, We touch but arn't touching, feel but arn't feeling, Love but are unloved, When slumber takes your hand, we will meet on the shores of never can be, Then someday soon, you and I will have it all and more, and we will remember...this. © Copyright 2000 OLIAS - All Rights Reserved |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done Sir. . . I too, enjoyed this very much. . . --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Absolutely beautiful... but these words alone do not do the poem justice... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Sigh for me no more my love, For sighs are dreams undreamt, words unspoken, And fires rekindled, If I could write endings this well, I may not mind them so much. Excellent! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is BEAUTIFUL!!! Thank you for this keeper. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Life may not be the song you requested, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I don't like endings at all. I always want love to last forever. This poem touched me to tears. **hug** you have a wonderful way with words. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Sven, Your too kind poet sir, thank you. Sunshine, Just some old linen that needed an airing, thanks for replying. Duncan, Your reply is much appreciated, thank you and be well. Enchantress, Thanks for dropping by ro read and reply, take care. Startime, This is one from the vaults, but Im glad you enjoyed. Thanks for your kind words of encouragement. Regards and happiness to all, Olias. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I've spent lots of time hanging out on the shores of never can be...James |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
*sigh*... Thank you for airing this particular linen. I really like the expression in this one  |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
JamesMichael, Yes, I think we all have at some time, thank you for your reply, be well. Pell, Your very kind, Im glad you enjoyed. Regards to you both, Olias. |
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