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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Weathered Ghostwriter, these words cannot be yours, they must be a stranger’s, trapped in sorrow’s flurry. I know, darling, serenity is not easy, when days are gelid, and real rest, beyond reach with only winds, walls (and phantoms) for company. Cannot say I haven’t thought of us, still do – when judgment is clouded, and memory is flawed, then I fall like rain. © 2001 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 11-20-2001).] |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I think we all do this at one time or another. peaches |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
Well, I haven't visited for awhile but i sure like this poem. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Cannot say I haven’t thought of us, still do – when judgment is clouded, and memory is flawed, then I fall like rain. I havent been here for a while, and this is what I have missed, wonderful, I can say no more. Regards, Olias. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I can relate to this one, Corinne. Great write.  All writing comes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
if only there was a raincoat for times like this. . . always good to read your work Cor. . . -------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
clouded judgement can often bring rain...I like the way you describe this, querida  |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I do love reading your work, it speaks to me. Of course I believe sitcoms are talking directly to me too. So are you looking for a ghost writer? Park |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks for reading and commenting, Peaches, Dennis, Olias, Lone Wolf and Sven. Hey, thanks for stopping by, Deer, great to see your words! Park, Park, Park, what ever shall I do with you? I was happy to see you post here again, haven't seen you in a while, hope everything is okay. Cor |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, dear Cor. So many truths in these words you pen in bittersweet thought. Words we have all had tumble in our minds of before..if only I could change this, of what was before. But we learned, and we survive, with more strength than of before..Very nice write..hugs, my good friend, with a very gentle smile |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Corrine - I also can relate, especially to these words; 'I fall like rain'. Sometimes gentle, at times hard, but the rain will fall... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* and then the rain fills our hearts. This poem touched my heart. I hope you have weathered the storm. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This shall weather quite well, for a long time to come... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you all for commenting with your sweet, sweet hearts. Cor |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Such rain fills your golden heart, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) Sometimes our serenity and judgement cloud up, and a rainbow will come out, and over the rainbow you can weather the rain below with the spirit of your love! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corrine, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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