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RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

0 posted 2001-11-17 05:27 PM

Things have a way of falling into place
Refilling the holes of empty space
From broken hearts like shredded lace
What I feel not necessarily makes sense
To Blame it on fate is my logical defense
Hearts can be angelic or deeply devious
Your love is like sunshine
Unlike the previous
My thoughts are clear, no longer clouded
True love exisits though it's often doubted
I dream of caressing your smooth skin of plush
Or complementing you as cheeks turn a shade of blush
Smooching lips of bubble gum pink
They taste just as good, don't you think?
I love your enchanting eyes that barely blink
Stare at me, read my thoughts
I'm so into you it's more than the hots
A work of art visual
Bonded attraction emotional and physical
Look in my eyes, draw me in
You fingertips feel like feathers trailing my skin
Your peepers flash twinkles
No tears present only magic sprinkles
Your energy dances effortlessly like candle light
When you whisper, it moves me like wind to a kite...

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-11-17 05:44 PM

Lovely work, Joanna. Much enjoyed this!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

2 posted 2001-11-17 08:32 PM

I read this poem while listening to Ja Ru;e's new song...no doubt...I'm feeling this for real. It made me visualize a boy and a girl in love with each other.

Do or die!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-11-23 11:02 PM

(sigh) Oh Joanna, you are soooooooo romantic! (sigh) Your words of love always make me swoon as your heart always sings with loves beauty! (sigh) May your heart forever be ouched by an eternal love that will melt into place always! (sigh) I love you, sweet Joanna! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2001-11-23 11:23 PM

Lone Wolf: thanks a bunch *wink

Domzi: I love hearing from you and Im anxious to read more of your great poetry.

Mistletoe: ((SMILES)) thanks for your sweet words babe. ((hugs))

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