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chiki
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0 posted 2001-11-16 01:17 PM


When I was little, LOVE used to sound to be something great, fun and simple.
When I got old enough to know about LOVE, I found out that IT IS something great and fun.

But "great and fun" was not the only thing I found.
I found out that LOVE could never be described in just a word.
For it makes you happy or sad or confused or thrill or bored or mad.
And sometimes, a mix of those feeling.

When I finally decided to take some adventures in LOVE, I learnt that LOVE is the most complicated thing that I've ever encountered.
When the time came for me to search for my real LOVE, I started to doubt, I started to reject, I started to get complicated, and ... I started to HATE my self.

LOVE oh LOVE ...

When will I find my LOVE
When will I find my simple LOVE
When will I find the true meaning of LOVE
When will the LOVE finds me?


They said, "Wuri, don't forget that GOD Him self is LOVE".
And I said, "Then the probability is very small for ME to find IT. *with a long sigh* ".

Wuri - 2001

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Gaia
1 posted 2001-11-16 01:39 PM


Wuri, I believe looking within IS the only way to find God, and Love. And yet, you have to look outside yourself in order to recognize the Love within. Yes, it is very complicated. Welcome to the blue pages. This is a wonderful beginning for you. Thanks for sharing your Love.
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2 posted 2001-11-16 01:41 PM



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3 posted 2001-11-16 03:18 PM



Thought provoking first post!
You will find a lot of writing about LOVE..
here on the blue pages.
I look forward to seeing more of your writing.
    ~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

chiki
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4 posted 2001-11-17 11:37 AM


Thanks to all of you for the support in the blue pages... now I know that I'm not alone... and I hope I won't be lonely either.

~ chiki ~

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