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Actions speak volumes
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Actions speak volumes |
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crazy4u Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 67 |
She walks coyly into the room And thinks for a moment of the time when she was truly tormented by her actions so awful that slapped her brusquely on the face. For her mind was a maze of uncertainties had she made the right choice in taking someone’s heart and ripping it out of their chest. She approaches the person sitting by the bar With eyes somber questioning herself and the expression on his face She sits and speaks justifications. He impulsively kisses her on the forehead with a joy that he can’t express Hugs her and demonstrates that she is forgiven and that everything is forgotten. She stands and whispers in his ear I love you. And with a small pool of tears in his eyes He says I love you too. She turns around and walks away Leaving the man alone and perplexed. As she distance herself from him her mind starts to wonder again had she done the Right thing? After all her actions were speaking volumes But her mind was a sea of uncertainty. [This message has been edited by crazy4u (edited 12-15-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!!Very powerful and very confusing signals are given to this man...My heart goes out to both of you. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
And what does the action say? That all is forgiven and the love is strong? or I love you too but you aren't forgiven? or I forgive you and love you but I'm leaving anyway? Maybe the confusion warrants not adding any more "action" to the scene? Lots to think about here, a good pondering write. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Such a bittersweet poem with much confusion of emotion and affection! (sigh) My heart goes out to you and him that this bewilderment can be replaced by understanding of true love! (sigh) So sad but well-written, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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crazy4u Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 67 |
hey guys this poem isnt about me... but thanx for the positive feedback  xoxo |
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