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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2001-12-10 02:27 AM

In the dreariest day
there is a bright spot
just a moment
a single ray of sun
to focus on
if you choose
to rest in the warmth.
I’ll be yours
you’ll be mine
and neither of us
will even have to say thanks.
What are friends for
if not this?

crazy4u
Member

since 2001-10-28

Posts 67

1 posted 2001-12-10 02:29 AM

Friends tend to be our sunshine in our time of darkness...
Lovely poem
xoxo

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

2 posted 2001-12-10 03:07 AM

Duncan, such tender sweet expression I enjoyed this read a whole bunch...
Muaah on cheekz PoetFriend 4sharing this precious lil gem of a poem with all of us here...

*~coco~*

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-12-10 03:50 AM

And you
are
a bright
light
on a
dark night.

Hugs, and thank you, Duncan.

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

4 posted 2001-12-10 04:16 AM

Indeed...
I love this!

I am many.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-12-10 07:05 AM

May not have to say thanks, but you know how much this means to me right now, so thanks. You've started a dreary day off with a smile.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2001-12-10 07:13 AM

A wonderful tribute to the warmth of friendship Duncan ... I enjoyed this very much!

Best wishes,
/Kit

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

7 posted 2001-12-10 07:18 AM

This is better than coffee after a long night without sleep.What are friends for if not for this? Great poem, Duncan.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-12-10 08:03 AM

This is beautiful, Duncan.

Thank you for this bright spot!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 12-10-2001).]

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

9 posted 2001-12-12 03:19 PM

There's always that silver lining, isn't there? We just have to search a little harder sometimes...

*smiles*

enjoyed this!

~Tier

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2001-12-12 03:23 PM

(smiles) Yes, yes, for you are our sunshine, and friends are forever! (smiles) We all love you so very much, sweet Duncan, may every one of our days be filled with that bright spot when friends are just a heartbeat away! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2001-12-15 12:01 PM

When I find myself dwelling on the negative things in my life I try to switch my thoughts and think of the good parts...sometimes it works...James

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

12 posted 2001-12-15 12:11 PM

Duncan,
What
Midnitesun
said.
Thanks!

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

13 posted 2001-12-15 12:35 PM

*sigh* your poem is the bright spot in my day for it comes with warmth, and friendship. I love the gentleness of your words. Soft and so pleasing. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

14 posted 2001-12-16 11:27 PM

Duncan-
   Such lovely thoughts of friendship you've penned.
   Much enjoyed this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

15 posted 2001-12-16 11:48 PM

Friendship, definately does bring sunlight into a person's life, I know I could'nt get through these days without the kind of good-hearted friends I have. Great poem Duncan!

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

rebekah33
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 140
MD/NJ

16 posted 2001-12-17 01:49 AM

What a great post! I surely don't know how I would get through my life w/out my daily bright spot...
-R.

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

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