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Hold Me |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Here's the link to my challenge poem "You Are There, Here With Me" in case you missed it: /pip/Forum52/HTML/001991.html Hold Me By: Noah Eaton 3/20/01 Open your heart to me, call my name Dance with me in the healing spring rain I'll be here... Come to me when your heart feels broken I'll put it back together again I'll be here... For every one of your tears has a name, every heartbeat an axiom I'll enlighten them each with joy, I'll warm your heart in every hug I'll be here... Whenever you need someone to share your woe with To chase the tornadoes and gray skies away, reach for a starkiss I'll be here... I'll kiss your tender lips until I leave you breathless Struck by passions lightning, bolting under your soft skin I'll be here... May I have this dance, love, I'll hold your hands dear Under the disco ball moon, I'll share with you the stars when you're near I'll be here Hold me Hand in hand Hold me Together we will dance Hold me Let me fulfill your joy and wonder Hold me I promise you I'll give you pure love, dear lover You are why the sun shines to me, how God has made you shine I now know why the stars wink, seeing the crystals in your eyes In your arms, I feel merry, I feel free Hold me... Hold me... Hold me... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-13-2001).] |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah,anyone would be very lucky to know that you`ll be there for them.  Juanita |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
Spoke right to my heart. If only there were more guys like you.... -R. "Draw a crazy picture, |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Great expression of love, everyone likes you if you are there for them, I know from experience. To be there shows love and care. Great writing Noah!! From your good friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
What a beautiful poem this is Noah. I like it.  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, You can write sooo sweetly! What an amazing heart you have to make me just sigh every time I read you  Hugs, Tara  "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 12-14-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, you have such love in your heart, I can only imagne how happy your life will be one day. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is wonderful Noah! BIG hugs to you! Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Noah! What love in your heart. It comes through so perfectly in your words. To read true love is a wonderful gift to receive. Thank you. Roger |
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