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You Are There, Here With Me (Lady In White's Challenge)

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Mistletoe Angel
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Lady In White thought up a beautiful challenge for us all. You can find her poem and her challenge here:
http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum52/HTML/001973.html

I encourage you all to write along too! Have fun! :-)

You Are There, Here With Me
By: Noah Eaton
12/12/01

You are there, here with me
Resting in the moonlight on cashmere sheets
Eden whispers in your eons of heartbeats
Embrace me, my love, we’ll make sweet love in harmony

Hold me close to your beating heart, sweet butterfly
I will suckle the grail of your loving passion
Side by side we will irresistibly lie
Feeling our hearts melt together in loving devotion

I will paint your dreams with rainbow light
In the moonlight, we’ll share this fond kismet kiss
Resting in the bed of destiny, gently caressing your face in the moonlight
Feeling the curves of your dreamy body with locked lips

Your heart is where I want to sleep
Your eyes are where I want to dream
Your lips promote everything your lovely heart sings
You are my angel, you fill my life with ecstasy

You are there, here with me
Hold me, sweet darling, I will share you my dreams
Here in your arms, we will happily weave
A whole new world…for you and me…
My love…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-13-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Lisping Hibiscus - All Rights Reserved
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wow Noah, this is a bit steamy   but challenge well met. I will give it a go later tonight  
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love this gem of passion and love.
Well done my dear friend  

((hugs))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*  

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Very well done!  I could imagine everything in the poem, I like that, Good job my friend!

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beautiful...helen
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A challenge very sensually met, sweet Noah!
~Hugs, Nancy~  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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Noah,
Very well done!

Joe Lamando
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Very sensual indeed! Great job Noah!

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A wonderful response to this delightful challenge!  Well done, Noah!
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Noah, this is a delightful read.  Very well done!
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Noah, leave it to you to weave such a beautiful poem. This is absolutely delightful. **hugs** Challenge well met.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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This is beautiful, Noah! A challenge well met.
  Merry Christmas To you! And, May All Your  Wishes And Dreams Come True!
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You are there, here with me
Resting in the moonlight on cashmere sheets
Eden whispers in your eons of heartbeats
Embrace me, my love, we’ll make sweet love in harmony
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beautiful imagery and a romantic passionate write.
wonderful response to the challenge...
a lovely turn of phrase.
well done poet Noah  
jm

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I was waitin on a different story.
This time I'm mistaken ...
for handing you a heart worth breaking.

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Sigh...
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you make me swoon like no other! challenge well met I'd say!!!!!
 
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