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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-12-11 05:05 PM


I cannot imagine losing you, not having you.
I don’t think my mind could endure it.
Just thinking of it brings a flood of tears.
My heart skips

You are part of me. Can be no other way.
Rivers of thoughts have flown before us.
Mountains of memories have grown.
A lifetime of love dwells within us.
You, dearest are my soul’s breath.

The glowing light of a full moon shines in you.
Your eyes reflect the brightest stars.
Words of love from your lips caress me.
My tears no longer flow free.

Times of struggle have long been endured
A bond of love our shield.
Our hearts beat as one eternally
Passions flow at just your sight.

Leave me not alone, for I will die without you.
Let me caress your mind as you do remain.
Give me a moment to always hold you.
Let our love, stronger, lift us high.

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-11 05:08 PM


How very beautiful - some lady is very lucky to have such love from you.  

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

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2 posted 2001-12-11 05:19 PM


Icequeen...thank you....No...I am the lucky
one....she blessed me with her presence.

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3 posted 2001-12-11 05:19 PM






(big hugggssssss) Oh Magnus, I couldn't ever imagine it either, with a beautiful loving heart such as yours! (sigh) You deserve eternal happiness, and love is bound to fill your heart with rapture forever! (smiles) We all love you so very much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-11 05:23 PM


Magnus,

    Just beautiful. I feel this way everytime I even think of my life without my love. Thank you for sharing.. it was wonderful.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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5 posted 2001-12-11 06:40 PM


Thank you Noah once again...
Magnus
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6 posted 2001-12-11 06:41 PM


Tara,  you have always spoken so well of
my words...I am pleased that you enjoy them.

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7 posted 2001-12-11 06:43 PM


yes, this is how it should be.....definitely!

You are blessed as is your wife!

Kathleen (Kay)
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Laurie Lee

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8 posted 2001-12-11 06:55 PM


*sigh* penned from a loving and sincere heart. To have such love as this is my Christmas wish. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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9 posted 2001-12-11 07:19 PM


you are just so darn romantic   you make me sigh and just smile   this is beautiful!!  
Magnus
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10 posted 2001-12-11 07:30 PM


Kay.....Yep,  I have a wonderful woman here.
Most of the time I love her deeply...
Occasionally....we get miffed....but we
always come thru it...She is my pillar of
strength and I am hers..

Magnus
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11 posted 2001-12-11 07:32 PM


OK Karen....one clone ordered....due in next
week...should arrive by December 24th...
Cost...2 Loonies and one Twoonie...think
you can come up with that...???

Thanx..

BTW...you will have to teach the clone how
to write poetry....I am not giving that
away....Not ever.

Magnus
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12 posted 2001-12-11 07:34 PM


Oh geeee...Sue...so pleased to see your
wonderful remarks....have missed them
terribly....thanx...Yep.  me the romantic.
I truly is one.....But I am still learning
more each day of how to express my romantic
feelings..

SEA
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13 posted 2001-12-11 07:45 PM


well just keep sharing them with us!! good grief you make us ladies swoon   all men should be so romantic  
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14 posted 2001-12-11 07:49 PM


Magnus...everyone needs someone to feel this way about them.  Thsi is truly between soulmates.  

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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15 posted 2001-12-11 08:01 PM


Sue...chuckling I am...and I do so much enjoy
writing how I feel.  Thank you.

Magnus
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16 posted 2001-12-11 08:02 PM


Thanx Dan...I do appreciate your thoughts..
35 years we have been together....With a lot
of bumps in the middle...learning to love
even at our age..

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