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Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06
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California, USA

0 posted 2001-11-15 11:53 PM


Born dirt happy poor
Mason jar baby bottle
Pressing lips with love
Cotton apron my blanket

Remembering that old porch
Big night sky shining
Stars seemed brighter then
To that little boy

Ma and Pa's laughter
Echoing from the cabin
Only security I needed
Hope alive in them

Now this man sits
Surrounded by mother's dreams
Things wanted for me
Compassion my greatest possession



© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2001-11-16 04:46 AM


This touched my heart---I can't say I was dirt poor, but the earmarks of my grandparents still adorn my life...ragrugs and quilts crafted, and cross stitch table cloths, and washcloths, with every edge embroidered...I treasure it all...thank you for this!
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2001-11-16 06:48 AM


Very nicely written Robert. I loved the concept of finding security in their laughter. Such a heart-warming piece ... much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
Posts 981
OK, USA
3 posted 2001-11-16 11:46 AM


Very well written.The simple things in life sometimes can hold so much more.
Peaches

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
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4 posted 2001-11-16 06:39 PM


Beautiful, Sir Robert. A poem that will touch the heart of all those blessed to read it. Wonderful.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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