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PoetriPrincess
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0 posted 2001-12-03 03:08 PM


Partial cloudiness in the sky
but, not so much; as to
obstruct my view

Not exactly windy
but, there is a steady breeze
though, not so cold;
as to chill me to the bone

If I were a kite....
I would sail til' I'd come
to the end of my string
into the sky, and lean in the direction
of its highest cloud in my endeavor
to become the closest toward Heaven

The imaginations of my Zzzz
that know the furnace of
my desires;
the fire within my Passions
and, the secrets of my Love

NoT ExAcTly,
"The Substance of things hoped for,..."
but, the desires revealed
behind the windows of the Soul,
of things longed for

Not yet reality;
for if I were a Dream,
I'd be a Dream Come True.


A Musician must make his Music,
An Artist must Paint,
A Poet must Write,
if he/she is to ultimately
be at Peace with himself.
  ~ Abraham Maslo

© Copyright 2001 Sarah A. Carter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-03 03:19 PM


~NoT ExAcTly,
"The Substance of things hoped for,..."
but, the desires revealed
behind the windows of the Soul,
of things longed for

Not yet reality;
for if I were a Dream,
I'd be a Dream Come True.~

Thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts.....like it a lot  

Charisma

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-12-03 03:26 PM


Fabulous finale!  I loved it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-12-03 03:27 PM


I liked the feel of this, made me feel lifted!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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