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Four Senryu
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Four Senryu |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
~~ buckets of cold rain pelt me fiercely as I walk through the storm's fury ~~ did you hear that sound? the one that echoes throughout? my heart still beats on ~~ You captured my heart in the great palm of Your hand it rests peacefully ~~ show me tenderness lead me down the primrose path to Your waiting arms ~~ All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Oh ... these are beautifully woven together~ Love this - 'You captured my heart in the great palm of Your hand it rests peacefully' Thank you for the beauty of your thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautifully done....like them all!!  ~*Theresia~* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is some good stuff here, well done!!!!!! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lone Wolf, Well I think you got your point across. Well done. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Good stuff lone wolf, im lovin' it!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"the Primrose path". . .that one just sticks out for some reason. . . great job LW. . . you're reaching deeper everyday. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
feeling lonely's cold being held in heart's beat warm brings me back to you Well done Lone Wolf...you're providing lots of inspiration.... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
All short..all sweet..all beautifully simply heartfelt. I love these.  Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge: Guess my muse was off to a good start today! Thanks for stopping by to read them. Charisma: Thanks! Kathleen: Somehow, I knew you'd like these. Sy: I try to do my best, thank you! RosePetal: Sven: Just a line that came to me. I figured it's good to stretch yourself every now and then. Thanks. Sunshine: I've inspired some lovely verse there. Thank you much. Temptress: Sometimes short and sweet is best I think. Thanks. All writing comes |
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