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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-11-30 12:27 PM



I have only begun
On this, my life quest
So many challenges
Each one a new test

I have only begun
To discover this person inside
And to you
Now, I confide

I am a blank canvas
An incomplete mess
I am but an unfinished painting
A work of art, in progress

I don’t know what the future holds for me
None of us ever really do
But I believe if you do good
Good will come back to you

I’m not perfect
Nor will I ever be
But I’ll be a masterpiece
When God Gets Done With Me


~SEA~
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this is the challenge folks  

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EagleScorpion
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1 posted 2001-11-30 12:28 PM


*smiles*
Well.. I feel that way too.. being incomplete and dissheveled.. boy.. it looks like I have quite a ways to go.

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2 posted 2001-11-30 12:31 PM


Well, He must be getting close to being done because you're getting masterpiecier every day!  
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3 posted 2001-11-30 12:39 PM


ES, happy to make you smile   thanks

Balladeer~ you are pretty master-piece-y yourself    

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4 posted 2001-11-30 09:41 AM


SEA~
You've done a beautiful job with the
'A Different Dab O' Ink' contest challenge~
I have received your e-mail with the URL~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-11-30 09:48 AM



I don't know where Marge's challenge is, but I like your response mighty fine...

none of us are ever done,
a struggle to see each day through
but you shine under the Sun
and I'm very proud knowing you...

Sudhir Iyer
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6 posted 2001-11-30 10:44 AM


wonderful......;

regards,
sudhir

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7 posted 2001-11-30 10:53 AM


Fantastic!  I don't know if any of us are ever 'done', so to speak.  It's an ongoing...as you say, "work in progress".
I like this!  But, where is Marge's challenge?  
Hugs, Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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