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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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that of the wind the voice of the wind whistles away loneliness such a ghostly sound Dark Angel November 30 2001 [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 11-29-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Dark Angel! Gee I looked at the date you wrote this, and thought I had lost a day....but, at second glance realized it is tomorrow where you are...the Internet pulls the world so close instantly. (my mind is wandering today, sorry. lol) You are a very clever writer. ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Dear Maree--so glad to see your name...and, yes it does, I know just what you mean. Hugs! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey Luscious---have missed you...although I am in and out these days too----but this reminded me much of the sound of high winds, as in a hurricane, how it can turn the house into a ghostly harmonica....it's eerie...like a low moan to keening to a train roaring...You obviously captured it well. Love you much!  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ooooooo I like this very much!! good to read you again  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very clever my friend...loved it! jwesley |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Sooooooo beautiful! (smiles) Love's hope fills your words and how beautiful the sound of fading loneliness sounds! (smiles) You are always sooooooo beautiful with your loving words! (kiss on cheek) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maree, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Nice write. Peaches |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dark Angel - what a wonderful write with so much in so few words. Excellent... 'the voice of the wind whistles away loneliness such a ghostly sound' the loniness of my voice speaks in whispers to the ghostly wind Hope you didn't mind my little addition. These few words of yours did inspire me to write them... As a matter of fact I have a poem in my head, inspired by your writing. Thank you Dark Angel BC |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey you. - I'm always listening to the wind. And you, just wrote it here in handfuls. More. I love hearing your voice. This drapes itself across my shoulders don't you know. - Hoping you are well M. *Peace. |
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