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devina
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0 posted 2001-11-29 06:03 PM



Gypsy’s Curse

Bestow upon our royal court-
Of fornication’s high consort,
Seeing past the thinnest skin-
Unearth her beauty deep within…

Beyond the worldly emerald eye-
Unlock the secret of many a night,
Scant deny her fire blazed tress-
To glimpse a brazen hunters nest…

Pertaining to a vision divine-
Ponder within aspirations find…
To crave maternity in dream-
Yet cursed of loneliness it seems…

Of her ancestor, never known-
Accursed woman…much renown,
Recklessly sealed both their fate-
With purloin of beau, a gypsy’s mate…

Any man you come so to love-
Shall meet his death, heaven above,
Thwart me not, shall it come to pass-
‘Tis a small price to pay for aftermath…

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



© Copyright 2001 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-29 07:10 PM


Ooooh...."gypsy" was once a nickname of mine---and with this you write in my language. But so far, as far as I know, I have not caused any fatalities!  

But...it's early yet...LOL

Loved your poem, sis! How's the baby? Dare I ask for more pics? HUGS

devina
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2 posted 2001-11-29 11:02 PM


Hey sis- tis nice to hear from you!!! Will send more pics...check the mail soon!! Love Ya!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



RosePetal
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3 posted 2001-11-30 12:51 PM


Hi! I like your poem, my fav lines were
"To crave maternity in dream-
Yet cursed of loneliness it seems…"

Well written!!!!


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4 posted 2001-11-30 07:06 PM


This is excellent. I love your rhyme! *sigh* Its great to see you here and writing.  

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

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5 posted 2001-11-30 11:46 PM


I like this one. . . mystical in a way. . .

good to see you again my friend. . . always. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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