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John Yaws
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0 posted 2001-11-28 07:14 PM



However You Explain It

I wanted so to call you,
And to hear your tender voice.
I stood beside the pay phone,
And I had to make my choice.

I wanted so to talk to you-
I know that I’m a fool…
Life’s a game that ends in death,
If you don’t play by the rules.

I guess it has to do with age-
The feelings that emerge…
Desires to live our youths again,
Surrender to the urge…

Of living loose and crazy-
Of running wild and free…
However you explain it,
It has gotten hold of me.

But I climbed back in my pickup,
And I heaved a weary sigh.
And drove on down the highway
With a teardrop in my eye…

Perhaps it is a product,
Of spending so much time alone-
However you explain it…
I guess I’ll just take it home.



© Copyright 2001 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved

© Copyright 2001 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-28 07:16 PM


*sigh* oh gosh the sadness just pours from these words. My heart goes out to you. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-12-02 08:29 AM



Ever read Badger Clark?  I think you would enjoy his work, as much as we enjoy yours...

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-12-02 08:45 AM


John,
Enjoyed the read.

Nan
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4 posted 2001-12-02 10:13 AM


We are the sum total of our life experiences... You, sir, have consummate wisdom...
Jenn Cirrincione
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5 posted 2001-12-02 01:05 PM


*sighhhhh*
This just hit me hard. Like, I could picture this happening. And it flowed marvelously. I loved it much.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

Denise
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6 posted 2001-12-02 07:51 PM


Excellent expression, John! Very well done!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2001-12-02 07:55 PM


John this is very insightful and extremely well done!  ~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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