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jonmcm
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since 2000-10-11
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England

0 posted 2001-10-07 05:35 AM




I do hold you
Captured upon my minds eye;
There is not a more magnificent view.

I have seen you
Talk so profoundly, yet clear;
Teacher, practitioner, my lover too!

I treasure you,
A ‘Jewel of Humanity’;
Your recognition has long since been due.

My hope for you
Is, that you enjoy first fruits
From the harvest cultivated by you.

© Copyright 2001 Jonathan McMahon - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2001-10-07 08:22 AM


And what a harvest this reaps.
Well done!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



jonmcm
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2 posted 2001-10-07 01:03 PM


Thank you Kethry
Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
3 posted 2001-10-09 05:58 PM


A really lovely tender poem

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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jonmcm
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4 posted 2001-10-10 05:02 PM


Titia, thank you for your kind remark.

Jon  

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