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. . . A mutual need . . . Sonnet
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. . . A mutual need . . . Sonnet |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Let us speak of love in quiet voices whispering in ears caressed by our breath. Knowing and caring, we make our choices believing our love survives even death. We confidently speak of heart’s desire without restriction, no hesitation as our words kindle a passionate fire, a mutual need for our relation. Hungrily, our lips meet, drinking in our emotional wine, inebriating conscience, allowing desire to tower higher and higher, and, as our hearts sing, we surrender, dear, each to this act, knowing that our love will survive intact. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey Tall Texan....I LOVE sonnets, and I am currently on a pentameter obsession, but enough about ME---the emotion behind this just made me say "oooh" out loud! 'Tis lovely. There is a delicacy of constancy here. Me applauds. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is beautiful, and I hope you share it with those friends of yours who celebrate with joy their anniversaries, as this offers a fresh look to the rest of their lives... well done, Sir! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper, this inspires and takes my breath away. Love this from you  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ I like this very much. Nicely flowing with your thoughts~ I'm enjoying your versatility~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
mutual love provides the same feeling as youth...an indestructible air....as it should be. nicely said |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hungrily, our lips meet, drinking in our emotional wine, inebriating conscience, allowing desire to tower higher and higher Oooh I loved these lines, passionate thoughts. Well Done. Maree |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh...I love this. Beautifully penned my friend. ~NancyLee~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Delicious... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
believing our love survives even death. Ahh, Interloper, you do speak of truths..gentle smile |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
We confidently speak of heart’s desire without restriction, no hesitation as our words kindle a passionate fire, a mutual need for our relation. This makes for two very happy people!  Very Lovely indeed! Sincerely, Regina |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
interloper, whew! very sensual |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"A mutual need for our relation"... expressed very well...James |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Woo...very sensual piece Interloper! Loved every word. ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done oh great voice of the Southland. . . you're getting better at these. . . great job. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
serenity ~ The Tall Texan scuffs his boot in the dirt, tugs on his hat to better hide the reddening of his face and replies "shux, ma'am, t'weren't nothin' though I am much obliged for your kind comments." Sunshine ~ I have shared it with my friends ... you and everybody that read my work SEA ~ GR8! I'm glad you liked it, gal Marge ~ What a valued comment from the Queen of versatility Balladeer ~ I value your comments above most. Thank you. DarkAngel ~ Thank you for your 1derful comments. I did strive for a certain level of passion Enchantress ~ If you loved my work, then you must also be a passionate person Thank you.Tiers ~ How long since I have heard from you? Would you like a second helping Logan ~ I hope to. Thanx loads Regina ~ I certainly hope so Chelsea ~ I think your first visit to my work. Thank you for reading and your wonderful comment James ~ Thanx for the visit and the kind comment SK ~ Wow ... every word? Now my stetson just won't fit Sven ~ Comming from the gr8 voice of the Northland that is high praise indeed. Thank you my friend. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Very sensual. One of your best. |
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