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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-10-05 07:24 PM

with each wash of wave
upon my beach
I feel my heart
instinctively reach
out for you
stretch of hand
knowing only
I understand
that you are there
here with me
soul to soul
not physically
and so I whisper
to draw you near
whisper quiet
so only you will hear
echoes of
your heart's beating
memories of
past love repeating
feeling me
a part of you
that face in dream
unclear view
that wakeful moment
wistful realization
I am real
not imagination............

~SEA~

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-10-05 07:26 PM

You've captured such a beautiful dreamlike quality in this phrasing Susan, very much enjoyed your thoughts in this piece.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-10-05 07:41 PM

knowing only
I understand
that you are there
here with me
soul to soul
not physically
and so I whisper
to draw you near
whisper quiet
so only you will hear
echoes of
your heart's beating
memories of
past love repeating
feeling me
a part of you
============================

*whispering* ...Yeeeessssss ... exactly.....
this is beautiful in its soft wistfullness sea-girlie

We're all feeding our lonely ... like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide ... if we just find the right words to say.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-10-05 08:14 PM

Beautiful as always Susan....
But, especially on this day. ~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2001-10-05 08:45 PM

and so I whisper
to draw you near
whisper quiet
so only you will hear

absolutely lovely Susan.

Maree

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2001-10-05 08:50 PM

I'm sure I've had dreams like this before. Loved this one.

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

6 posted 2001-10-05 08:51 PM

this is entirely lovely, SEA

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

7 posted 2001-10-06 12:20 PM

Ah, this is so dreamy. Just beautiful.

I am real
not imagination............

And what a lovely closing phrase.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

8 posted 2001-10-06 06:29 AM

SEA, the longing in this is sad yet beautiful. I enjoyed.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

9 posted 2001-10-06 07:16 AM

Sea...this is beautiful, so soft and sweet

Topheth
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

10 posted 2001-10-06 09:56 AM

Exquisite, Susan. Very tenderly enjoyable.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2001-10-06 12:06 PM

This is so good.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2001-10-06 12:20 PM

very nice...you are real..and I am not a fairy tale..same thought wave this morning...*s I enjoy your words and spirit SEA, always

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

13 posted 2001-10-07 01:15 AM

You know - you write with such tenderness and softness, it soothes the soul. This was lovely Susan.

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

14 posted 2001-10-07 08:09 PM

SEA--

Hi darlin!! Beautiful writing as always.
I tell ya, no one writes love like you
do!! This was just beautiful!! It is
lovely to see your work once more.
Take care

Amy

"If I am ever going to mend this broken heart...you look like a good place to start"

~George Strait~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

15 posted 2001-10-08 02:55 PM

let each wave assure
we are kindred souls always
nothing surreal here
~*~
imagination
keeps your image fresh in mind
never forgetting

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

16 posted 2001-10-08 03:06 PM

This rolls along as splendidly as does an ocean's curl....

this is marvelous! I'm so PROUD of you!

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

17 posted 2001-10-08 03:47 PM

very soft and tender

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

18 posted 2001-10-08 06:36 PM

SEA, you always make me shake my head in awe when you write like this..very gentle smile

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

19 posted 2001-10-08 06:49 PM

Sea, very beautiful, soft and sweet! Enjoyed.

~hugs~

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

20 posted 2001-10-08 06:57 PM

nice

Tara Simms
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since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

21 posted 2001-10-09 09:25 AM

SEA, your work always astounds me. Great writing and emotion!

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