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Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2001-09-20 05:18 PM

*
Who would want to walk with me,
explore with open eyes,
experience the difference
between reality and lies?

*
I kissed you as a friend,
but that began to blend
into something other -
kissing as a lover.

*
Now we’re back to tit-for-tat;
a faint bit this, quaint little that.

[This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-20-2001).]

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

1 posted 2001-09-20 05:27 PM

Topheth, these under 20's are really interesting. How you guys can say what you want to in such a short time has got me beat. Maybe I just talk too much.

Enjoyed all three.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

2 posted 2001-09-20 05:34 PM

Thank you, Dee. Some are mere exercises to help frame the mind - others, a captured wing of something great that got away.

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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-09-20 06:30 PM

I'd wager she is regretting you getting away

how do you do these under 20?
are there rules?
I like these very much

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-09-20 07:48 PM

I love these...would also like to know the rules, if any. Like, do they have to rhyme? Because my poetry sure doesn't. lol...good ones, enjoyed.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

5 posted 2001-09-20 08:41 PM

As far as I know - just keep the number of words at twenty or less. As for rhythm or rhyme (and I certainly love rhythm, and rhyme when it happens) it's your call.

Rule #1 - 20 WORDS or less.
Rule #2 - 20 words or LESS.

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NightShadow
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 127
New Jersey

6 posted 2001-09-20 08:50 PM

Very nice! Ive never seen a poem like this.. whole 20 thing! A new thing for me to try! very cool!

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-09-20 09:41 PM

ok

sounds easy enough
I'll give it a go

(thanks)

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

8 posted 2001-09-28 03:27 AM

definitely fun to read these are

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