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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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December Death  Another day, another decay another scream within this shell, another ember of emptiness another weep within this hell... tomorrow, I shall rise once more to find that joy's a padlocked door and see my dreams dissapear in the pain of another year, the Lord above is mocking me handing satan my destiny I sit on the throne of forever alone cast into regret's cyclone, dark december is calling me 'tis my fate of vacancy, sacrificed to vile unknown rot of heart to beast and stone, here's my soul to slash and slay scatter my pulse in disarray, bleed of flesh shall liberate seep of breath does vindicate, only death can bring release reaper, I beg for final peace By Melissa P. Monette |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
Dark harbor is where you live. Wow I liked it but that picture is just too scary. J |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Melissa, this sounds like a REAL bad hair day!!  I'm gonna need to make you smile  |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Pretty dark thoughts here Melissa. There must be something in the air today here in Ontario, or else you're my twin. Cause I just wrote one with similar thoughts. But dammit, you express them so much better than I. Here's to hoping we both get out of our blue moods soon. Hugs to you from here in Cambridge  If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Melissa - This is about as dark as anything I've read in a great long time. Are you OK? Should I maybe write you a special kitty-kicker poem or something to cheer you up a bit? |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Melissa, how unusual to read something this dark from you - leaving the reader with a gloomy feeling. Another part of poetry you master, therefore... well done! Although I hope all is well with you. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well crafted Melissa. I liked the poem a lot, but I hope you're doing well.  God bless America, my home sweet home. [This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 10-05-2001).] |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
my goodness, this is dark! But honest! Sometimes we just don't feel like smiling do we? But try!!!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed, there are few who know the darkness as well as you. . . superbly done my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hmm I don't recall ever reading anything dark from you Melissa. I must say great writing! Hope you're ok Maree |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, I thought I was the only one that went from hot to cold. But I see you also touch upon the bold of coldest cold. I think it's in the make up of a good poet. *L* |
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