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Open Poetry #16
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JamesBowie
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since 2000-11-25
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack
0 posted 2001-10-04 10:27 PM

Still the motion catches my eye
a key, a blade, I know not which
till the falling of black stones
crosses my vision, blotted with
blossoms of red, speading freely
loosed from long time vessels
and a heart still full of love
and a mind with ambition
but never will they occur
as my head strikes the pavement
© Copyright 2001 James Bowie - All Rights Reserved
The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03
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1 posted 2001-10-05 03:56 PM

I can't believe no one responded to this, it is wonderfully specific and fresh!
arthur
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since 2001-08-14
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england
2 posted 2001-10-05 04:12 PM


striking
in more ways than one
arthur
rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
3 posted 2001-10-05 08:01 PM

A perfectly penned attack on the senses here. I hope this was not an actuality and just a very vivid piece. It felt fatal!

Sincerely,
Regina
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