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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-09-20 09:15 AM


Sometimes I feel confused
and I don't know what to do
now he wants me back
but I have these feelings for you.

He's been gone so long
it was him that walked away,
but I can't ignore what once was
it was the past, another day.

I know how you make me feel
and I'm so content and warm
the confidence in your voice
tells me I'll be safe from harm.

My memories still remind me
the days with him, so new
my mind don't know what to think
my heart is now torn between two.



On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 09-20-2001).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-09-20 10:01 AM


Gentle Spirit,
Gentle is as gentle does. Nice write.

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with you
2 posted 2001-09-20 10:37 AM


what a place to be, my heart goes out to you. I hope it works out for your heart.   (((hugs)))
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3 posted 2001-09-20 11:23 AM


GentleSpirit~
Oh shucks ... I'm a Libra ... I hate making decisions !

But Grandma said, 'A bird in the hand hasn't flown the coop yet !'

Nicely written feelings~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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The Rusty Knight
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4 posted 2001-09-20 11:35 AM


Don't be torn girlfriend...you are enough woman for both of them   it is harder sometimes being in love with too many than too few and you caught that feeling here.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

[This message has been edited by The Rusty Knight (edited 09-20-2001).]

Balladeer
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5 posted 2001-09-20 11:23 PM


been there...done that...been there...done that...been there....done that  
HopeS
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6 posted 2001-09-21 12:32 PM


Ahhh the rock and the hard place !!
so difficult when heart is divided in two
Hope

jamesjiao
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7 posted 2001-09-21 06:17 AM


Very true. I feel for you. You will get out the mess, believe me.

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.



Suzanne Arlene
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8 posted 2001-09-21 06:36 AM


The answers always come to you.You just have to give it time.   Good luck Suzanne
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