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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-09-25 04:25 PM

Holding the Day

the leaves are in shadow, cast
soft away as day thus fades
but I’m held in memories fast
seen rich in love’s silk brocade
for arms around me bear me well
he counts every breath I breathe
as loving hearts shall thus then swell
my love, he shall not leave

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

1 posted 2001-09-25 04:26 PM

I like this

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-25 04:36 PM

*sigh*...so lovely and very romantic. Enjoyed much!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-09-25 05:22 PM

Sunshine,
A very sweet write. Enjoyed *L*

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-09-25 06:54 PM

Oh but this spoke to me, and of a higher love, thank you for this one.

~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

5 posted 2001-09-30 09:10 PM

Thoughts that shake off the chill of the night

Very nice

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

6 posted 2001-09-30 10:15 PM

but I’m held in memories fast
seen rich in love’s silk brocade

A very lovely write, for without memories, what good is the past?..very gentle smile

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-10-01 09:24 AM

Karilea~
And you share the thoughts ever so gently~
Thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-10-01 10:02 AM

Sunshine, this goes beyond beautiful, beyond touching, I think this is wonderful

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2001-10-01 10:29 AM

Beautiful, indeed.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

10 posted 2001-10-01 10:35 AM

Beautiful...so beautifully done...love it!

Charisma

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2001-10-01 10:50 AM

liked it

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

12 posted 2001-10-01 10:54 AM

Soft gentle and loving...one could ask for nothing more...beautiful Sunshine...

bonnie1961
Junior Member

since 2001-09-30

Posts 44
ny, usa

13 posted 2001-10-01 10:57 AM

very sweet. thank you!

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