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Domzi
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since 2001-09-08
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0 posted 2001-10-18 07:47 PM


              A love that was scattered
              when you found a tranquil
                        heart

              A shallow promise parts
               feelings of desire; a
               piece of deep passion

               The absence of Eros'
               flame leaves ashes

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

© Copyright 2001 Dominique N. C. - All Rights Reserved
The Lady of Shallot
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1 posted 2001-10-18 08:09 PM


and from those ashes, come a phoenix....

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-
Anna

Startime
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2 posted 2001-10-18 08:54 PM


*sigh* you rise stronger and better from the broken heart. My heart goes out to you.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

RosePetal
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3 posted 2001-10-19 12:16 PM


Tight work Domzi. I know this must have been written some time ago because you are happy with your man now : )
wayoutwalt
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4 posted 2001-10-20 04:54 PM


perfectly stated yuh
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