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Open Poetry #16

Pain

juanrodriguez
Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-10-16 03:19 PM

wishing for eternal! sleep
as high! as the moon
my love has gone
no matter time or place
you ment to me the same
I cry and yern for fame
but wish more that u can call upon my name
in the morning my memories 4 u are first
before i drop my feet to walk
ur sweet voice goes 2nd
you cant imagine how it feels
to loose a loved one
and know she still there
a wonded lion will drop soon enough
a relieved soul will rise in the process
with much more dreams to see the next day
a king cat does never budge
till the pain is much greater
than its own will to live on march
my heart cryes with open drains
the long past memories
keep blastin in my brain
as shooting rocket bursting
with our many loving images
for u I did it all but change
now I just wana sleep
and never wake once again

LOVE IS HARD TO FIND ....BUT WHEN U DO ITS HARD TO DEFINE JUAN PABLO

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-16 03:35 PM

*sigh* my heart goes out to you. I pray that with time the pain will become much less. Writing it out helps a great deal and you have done a very good job of doing that with this poem.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-10-16 04:03 PM

"Now I just want to sleep
and never wake up again."
I remember this feeling well...James

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