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Jon Mewett
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0 posted 2001-10-16 10:19 AM


As I watch you standing there
Standing all alone
I feel the pain your feeling
I feel the pain your feeling

If you would only…… let me
Be your rock your stone
I think there’d be a healing
I think there’d be a healing

Take this hand I offer
Let me come back in
I think you will stop crying
I think you will stop crying

Listen to this whisper
Whispered just for you
Can’t you hear me sighing?
Can’t you hear me sighing?

Your love my only sustenance
Is flying from my grasp
And if I live the consequence
I’ll be living my last gasp

Take this kiss for only you
And cherish it for me
I love you now what can I do
Look over here you’ll see

…………………………………………….

But as wake I feel you there
Your soft breasts rise and fall
The tears I cry because I care
Your voice and……. Angels call

I realise it was just a dream
A trick the devil plays
When we sleep he comes right in
And some times he even stays

But the fear is real of loosing you
Your perfume quells my heart
And if the dream was really true
My senses would depart

So quietly now as I lie here
And watch you gently sleep
A prayer to heaven quick I steer
Lord …….can I my angel keep?        Forever
Jon Mewett



All these moments
In time
Will be Lost
Like Tears in the rain


[This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 10-16-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-10-16 10:45 AM


*sigh* a poem filled with love and devotion. Hold tight to her and your angel will ever be safe in your arms. I love to read of love and when you write of the love you have for your angel I feel the beauty of your words. Well done. Thank you, so much, for sharing this wonderful poem.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-10-16 11:39 AM


Jon~
I enjoyed this thought~

'So quietly now as I lie here
And watch you gently sleep
A prayer to heaven quick I steer
Lord …….can I my angel keep?'


Nicely done~
~*Marge*~

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Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-10-16 11:49 AM


Jon,
Well done, looking forward to more.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-10-16 04:08 PM


Enjoyed this Jon...James
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