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Aimster
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0 posted 2001-10-10 06:02 PM


On The Line
AMK
October 10 2001

I heard your voice on the line today
And just for a moment I went back in time
I traveled to a simpler place, another world
When I was still yours and you were still mine--

I don't want you in that way anymore though
We truly are just the best of friends
But sometimes I wonder
Why did we end??--

I have another now and I do love her
I do love her very much
But sometimes I miss you
And the friendship of your touch

Life sure is crazy
What with all its ups and downs
Sometimes its filled with smiles and happiness
Other times its made of pain and empty frowns

You're still my best friend
I doubt that will ever change
Sometimes though life throws a curve
And love is rearranged

I pray that you will be happy
I hope you find a love too
Just remember that I still care
And often think of you

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure.
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night

© Copyright 2001 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-10-10 06:10 PM


Very thought provoking and quite understanding
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-10-10 06:19 PM


It's so nice if you can move on and wish the other person all the best.  Nicely said.
~NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

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with you
3 posted 2001-10-10 06:23 PM


very well done Amy, soft sweet and sincere  
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4 posted 2001-10-10 07:35 PM


this time always comes. . . and it warms. . .

great job my friend. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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