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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-10-09 09:28 AM

Tiny cotton candied clouds--
rainbows realm enwrapped in shroud..
I used to be so very proud,
and now I have just passed away.

Silver arrows pierce pink heart
sour melt of the sweet tart--
too bad--how sad--to end at start--
and now I simply slip away.

And yes it's true, the Mares eat oats;
(I'm digging for the antidote)
And Does, yanno, (they eat them too...)
I'll save the crunchies just for you.
Little lambs will nibble ivy
just as sun sets sail behind me.

Little kids eat ivy too.
If you were starving, wouldn't you?

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-10-09 09:32 AM

Serenity~
A VERY creative play on phrases of a sweet little song~

I like it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2001-10-09 10:16 AM

I would I guess - can I boil it up with my pease porridge?

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

3 posted 2001-10-09 10:27 AM

Serenity~ Crunchies? Sure I'll take some...but I kinda had my eye on the cotton candy

I agree with Marge, very creative piece girly girl

Fun to read!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

insect
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since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

4 posted 2001-10-09 02:19 PM

The sun is melting in my mouth
Overcast clouds arrive from the south
Floating by like pollen without reach
So very tasty and soft as a peach

This vision of hunger sits on my tongue
Turning back time, stopping at young
Sweet tooth glitters and shines in your smile
Laughing with friends forever and a while

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2001-10-09 05:36 PM

You do the most wondeful things with poetry, yanno? I love this!

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

6 posted 2001-10-10 09:35 AM

I love the lightheartedness in this one!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2001-10-10 10:01 AM

Very good! I'd rather have the cotton candy.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2001-10-10 08:00 PM

I'd like to thank you all for your kindness, although I am not too happy with the outcome of this one....was meant to be a more biting piece---guess the sarcasm was not strong enough, but I hey, I gotta watch it sometimes...Smiles to all, and this one shall be put on the back burner for perhaps a re-write...thank you!

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