To expel darkness in clouds?

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Open Poetry #15

To expel darkness in clouds?

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-07-25 05:16 PM

Drawing my love on paper
scribbling, pausing
then erasing
Thinking, writing
absorbing
What draws me to you?
To expel darkness in clouds?
This new emotion
waiting, quietly
in these lines
to be read.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

1 posted 2001-07-25 06:10 PM

Ahhh! May you feel like pure sunshine! Inspired!

Thanks.
Sincerely,
Rwood

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-07-25 06:13 PM

fascinating treatment of your subject

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

3 posted 2001-07-26 06:31 PM

Beutiful little poem, I'm glad that I could read it .
Thanks, L.of.L. Tommy .
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