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those days |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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those days there are those days when multi- faceted tenets are crystaled clarity, mirrored factions and I am pleased by the refraction there are those days Gumby-spined all I am missing is green latitude but buoyed by my friend’s consistent smile then there are those days when the pull of taffy’s elasticity becomes stiffer, even in the hot sun, as it can only take so much before the break, until… until it meets the mouth and dissolves into the melt tomorrow I will crystallize again |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I like this Sunshine  Lovely writing! Maree "little miss understood |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Boy, I used to love the taste of taffy when I was young, especially on warm summer days when one could just pull and pull and watch it stretch until it became spaghetti thin and then hold it high over the mouth and let it fall in.....this poem put that taste right back in my mouth...after many years. Thanks, Sunshine!!! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sunshine- Oh, man...now I need some taffy!! LOL This is just wonderful, Sunshine... I love it!  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I have a sudden urge for Taffy. Loved the paralells you used in this. Wonderful write. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Sis, those days of of innocence and fun and all the world was happy..very gentle smile |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ 'there are those days Gumby-spined all I am missing is green latitude but buoyed by my friend’s consistent smile' 'Multi-faceted' indeed .... *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
green latitude -- I like this. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
 I know those kind of days, and Pokey spined ones too Nicely done.PM "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 07-23-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah.. nicely done. Nicely carried through and clear... this is one of those poems I enjoyed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Mmmmm-mmmmmmmmm good! |
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