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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-07-22 02:27 PM

                                          My heart beckons
                                     to learn not just how to forgive,
                                         but also how to mend.

                                          My heart beckons
                                         to once again dance
                                         with you in the rain.

                                          My heart beckons
                                          to no longer feel
                                        this never ending pain.

                                          My heart beckons
                                           to know what
                                            love is for.

                                          My heart beckons
                                            to hold you...

                                           just once more.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

1 posted 2001-07-22 02:34 PM

Anyone who with the heart to write this already knows what love is for. Lovely poem.

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-07-22 02:38 PM

OH.....I'm not sure what to say Jamie, thank you so much for those kind words. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

3 posted 2001-07-23 01:23 AM

This one hit home with me my friend, well written. So much like my own thoughts on this page, with subtle differences

Nice job.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-07-23 01:39 AM

yearning piece

especially liked the power behind that last line...just once more

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2001-07-23 06:32 PM

With a heart like yours ... I have no doubt that your heart will find exactly what it is in search of. Besides, when it beckons as beautifully as this verse, it is surely going to draw some attention to the matter. Wonderful write.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-07-23 06:35 PM

Lovely piece ... love the imagery.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2001-07-23 07:20 PM

Thanks go out to all of you. I do appreciate it very much. Mark, I guess you have to know what it is that your heart wants, and then decide if it's worth it or not. Decisions......decions....I appreciate the kind comments from you all. Just a tough time right now dealing with the heart......such a tricky thing it seems to be. I just can't help but wonder if it ever gets any easier, or makes any sense. I'm babbling again.......sorry gang. I really truly do appreciate you all. Hugs to all, and luv.
Donna

{I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~ Garth}

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

8 posted 2001-08-09 08:54 AM

WONDERFUL AUNT DONNA!!!!!!!! omg i loved this.....*hugs*

death is certain, life is not
have u ever needed somebody so bad, u cry when u arent around them, and still miss them when u r around them?

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