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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-07-17 06:29 PM


If there were but
one drop of dew
in rainbow field
of sparkling hue,
on hands and knees,
beyond Pride's yield--
Know you, now--I would find you.

I do not care for wishes, grant...
However, sweet, is sweet romance...
Bodies--all, they pass away.
Forever--I have felt this way.
You remain connecting piece
to puzzle of eternity.

My heart is but a sacrifice;
and if I could, I'd offer twice--
"Receive this blade,"
the virgin prayed,
"for nothing else, will now suffice..."


*repost from Open #7*


© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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1 posted 2001-07-17 06:43 PM


Well, I sure don't remember this one but I'm glad you reposted it, I think this is one of your best!

"It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty

Kathleen

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
2 posted 2001-07-17 06:50 PM


My heart is but a sacrifice;
and if I could, I'd offer twice--
"Receive this blade,"
the virgin prayed,
"for nothing else, will now suffice..."


Dark and enchanting.


SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2001-07-17 07:50 PM


~Well Miss. K,...I see now that I've missed lots around here lately. No feasible way for me to catch up but mam', could we please get these marvelous bits of you bound for me? I've read this now, three times fast, another one real slow,...you lady, have got yourself one poetic mind. I am continuously shaking my head while reading you, saying to myself, 'how _does_ she do this, speak in such a fashion'. Always pulled in by you. *Peace poet. ~A.
Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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Ontario, CANADA
4 posted 2001-07-17 07:55 PM


Wow - well expressed with that flair all your own~

Melissa~

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-07-17 07:57 PM


Wow ... no greater love ... Well done
Balladeer
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6 posted 2001-07-17 08:36 PM


this style suits you very well, serene one...
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
7 posted 2001-07-17 09:47 PM


Serenity~
Simply en-canting~

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

Logan
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since 2001-05-28
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Arkansas
8 posted 2001-07-17 10:17 PM


Ahh, what can I say, but Wonderful..gentle smile
Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
9 posted 2001-07-17 11:28 PM


This so beautifully written, absolutely exquisite, I loved every word.  
Take care......Sue

Suetang

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