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thecraig
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0 posted 2001-07-16 04:08 PM


The rain drop falls
& finds the place
special spot
crystalline grace;
                        
Where the mark lands
water bursts vibrantly
shifting soil & sands,
then sitting soft slushingly;

Sadness from above
has nature not been kind?
soon enough shall find
purpose little tear, surely give you use
advantage from your juice;

Take your place upon the shore.
while sea behind you roars.
Wait & let the suns rays help
poor spirits rise;
Then drift the floating mists & tides ,
search on needing eyes;

© Copyright 2001 Craig Poole - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-16 04:10 PM


nicely descriptive..and good use of imagery... I enjoyed!!!
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