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Emeraude
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Emeraude |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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when I look inside myself I find the love I have for you it’s a love that I thought I would never find again a love that speaks like the plaintive ebony voice of a clarinet mellow and haunting one moment tender and flowing the next in the lower notes warm and deep in the higher notes avian and flying to the stars on wings of life a voice that can only be heard by you a melody that has long been kept silent but now yearns to let go again to sing only for you Emeraude in a language that not even the masters themselves could have spoken in or composed in their minds such music was not meant for public performance but only meant to be heard in the most intimate of settings the salon of the heart, the gallery of the spirit this is the voice that I have for you Emeraude a voice that you have not only inspired, but a voice that you have given back to me so that I might always be your song your song of life your song of love only for you my Emeraude only for you ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Now that... is a love poem!!! Lordy if that don't melt the hearts.... nothing is going to... Melted mine..and you aren't my type ( grinning) Very nicely done Sven |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ 'only meant to be heard in the most intimate of settings the salon of the heart' Very uniquely said~ Nice~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Can almost hear you singing this one, Sven. Great to see someone so in love, congradulations! Cor |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The great voice of the northland has honey dripping into melted hearts. You go, guy! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love can open up a treasure chest of emotions for our pleasure....James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is wonderful. I like the ending, it is so full of emotion. Sandra |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, "WOW and WOW" you are truly something when it comes to writing from the heart and soul, beautifully done dear Sven. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Sven! Very well done! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Written with the ink of romance..love it sven...beautifully done..  ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, Sven, this is definately a keeper, but, then again, I'm sure you knew that I would love this! What a clever, romantic write from your soul.  It's beautiful and it's making me swoony  lol!Melissa~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aha...this should be scent to every woman.... |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
First time I read your poetry.... I've only been here a few days.... but, how this moved me!!!! WoW! Only the moon and stars really know how electrifying this piece is. From what I can see you are a true poet laureate....This deserves a  Love and peace ((~.~)) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*quiet sighs*  Its good to see you writing like this. |
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