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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-07-16 10:33 AM

Words drip like water
from the tips of icicles
On a spring day,
Feeding the earth with
Cold moisture to be stored
In the empty spaces
For the dry times.

Words flow like streams
Over soft soil
Eroding away the debris until
Bedrock
Hard and resisting
begins to feel
The wearing wash

Words undulate
Like waves
Leaving behind on their
Retreat
Odd bits of treasure
For the curious to find

Words Shared…
With you.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-07-16 10:45 AM

I so love the feel of this, the whole piece undulates waves of sensations with words carved as if into sand and water's swell

it feels like gentl hair-brushing, why is that? it doesn't speak of such

I'm amazed.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-07-16 11:12 AM

What it feels like...is a hydration....

well done, Sir!

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

3 posted 2001-07-16 11:33 AM

Hi Cpat. Hair,

I really loved the imagery of this poem and the message it convays, it's also thought provoking, enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

4 posted 2001-07-16 11:49 AM

Oh well, what else could I say but...

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-07-16 12:02 PM

Cpat Hair,
Words are like herds driven to market waiting for a buyer. Enjoyed

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

6 posted 2001-07-16 12:41 PM

Words are this and so much more. Now, imagine the power of music...

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

7 posted 2001-07-16 12:47 PM

Oh, so creative and cool. I love this!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-07-16 05:57 PM

Just call me a treasure hunter ... of course, this is one place I search

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-07-16 08:21 PM

I never get tired of hearing about words, I love words...just have to be careful which ones we choose.

"It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty

Kathleen

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