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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-08-27 04:45 PM





Sunset

Purple coloured clouds
area of dreamy sun
merge in golden hue


Charisma
~*TMP*~

Thank you Marge for the beautiful picture
27/08/01




[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 08-28-2001).]

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ethome
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1 posted 2001-08-27 04:52 PM


Very nicely done once agin my dear hearted lady poet!
shadow974
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2 posted 2001-08-27 05:02 PM


Charisma, you write excellent Haiku. I've never taken the time to learn, maybe it's time.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
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Titia Geertman
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3 posted 2001-08-27 05:37 PM


Charisma, love your haiku, see that sunset so often here in open country, you described it beautiful.

Titia

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Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-08-27 05:59 PM


Charisma~
Your words paint the loveliest pictures in my mind~
How I thank you for sharing these beauties~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-08-27 06:05 PM


Charisma,
Execellent, this is a keeper.

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6 posted 2001-08-27 06:56 PM


a wonderful portrait my friend. . . you do it very well. . .



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Charisma
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7 posted 2001-08-28 02:31 PM


ethome: thank you my dear friend  

shadow974: thank you for your kind comment, and it is really a great form to do....will look out to your first haiku

Titia: thank you my friend, sunset can be  sooo beautiful.

Marge:it is my pleasure to share with you my dear friend.  

Seymour: thank you and I am truly honoured that you think that this one is a keeper  

Sven: thank you my friend  

cpalmer
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8 posted 2001-08-28 03:38 PM


beautfully done!
Cindi

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9 posted 2001-08-28 03:46 PM



Ah Charisma...what you do...so wonderful!

VAS
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10 posted 2001-08-29 12:51 PM


SUPERB

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11 posted 2001-08-29 01:50 AM


very cool!!

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You still have made a choice."
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Charisma
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12 posted 2001-08-29 09:52 AM


cindy: Thank you  

Lady in White: Thank you for the wonderful  

Vas: thank you my friend for the superb  


ramrog:Thank you for reading and your cool comment  

vandana
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13 posted 2001-08-29 11:14 AM


enjoyed
kitkat
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14 posted 2001-08-29 11:21 AM


I have always enjoyed a good Haiku. This is good :-)

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